I'm walking. No where to hide.
Finally! I crouch down. Shadows appear. Turning my head to look up all I see is baby blue.
Foot steps.
"Is that her or not?"
We squeeze. I push.
"Stick to the wall." I say. "Stick to the wall!"
Restless and cramped. Cobwebs hanging delicately.
"Please don't find me, please"
And there she is...she's gone!
Feeling a bit lonely, I bite my lip. I've got to get out of here.
All I hear is children laughing in the distance.
"Ok! I give up! I'm here"
But they have all vanished.
Glad but worried all at the same time.
"Oh, they have gone to lunch."
During English we played Hide and Seek. Tara wrote about what it was like to hide from her teacher.
Wow. What an awesome piece of writing Tara. It makes me feel like I am right there playing with you!
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from Andrew
I liked it when you said'' oh thev gone to get lunch'' by lily
ReplyDeleteThat was a cool hide and seek game story
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WOW!!!Amazing story.All I want to know is where were you hiding?
ReplyDeleteFrom Madison
It sounds like you had alot of fun.I love the verbs.
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hey Tara!I liked the way that you described things very well like baby blue. My question is did you find them in the end?
ReplyDeletethat was from Marianne!
ReplyDeletei like your hide and seek story because i renember when i was playing hide and seek cool!!!
ReplyDeletei liked when you said all I see is a baby blue
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you used great adjectives in your story. ♥
ReplyDeleteFrom:Marianne
great story Tara you painted the picture with words perfectly
ReplyDeleteI can't stop reading your story. From Madison
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