Wednesday, 16 November 2011

Writing As Pretty As Singers by Sera

Sera has been learning English for a year. This is her own writing about her favourite t-shirt.  She is an amazing writer because she captures the moment and she writes from her heart.

When I was walking around the city.I saw one pretty as singers.so i did every kids do!so i said”mum can I buy this?pretty please?”but my mum didn’t let me buy that so I keep said that “please”that one word then my mum is so tired so my mum said”oh right.buy that  t-shirt!”so i buy that t-shirt and it colourful as rainbow and pretty as a barbie.and a really  like that t-shirt and i choose a big size one because so it canfit when i am older.now it perfect fit but it little bit big to me.so now do you understand my best t-shirt? 

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