Showing posts with label feelings fear broken-hearted sadness. Show all posts
Showing posts with label feelings fear broken-hearted sadness. Show all posts

Sunday, 16 September 2012

How do you write about a feeling?

W.A.L.T choose and organise words.
Sad
Sad is like pain,
Sometimes it never goes away.
It is dark blue,
Like the deep blue sea.
You feel like you
want to cry.
You hear
the water flowing.
It makes you weep
and cry.

By Ciaran 


Broken Hearted
Broken hearted is like being chipped with a miner's pick axe

By Jordan 

Fear
 Fear is like prickles in the grass
The pain you get when you touch them
The sound is screeching noises
It is dark purple and black that fills inside you
It makes you crouch down and hide
At the end you feel quite sick


By Georgia

Broken Hearted
Its like your heart is decapitated
It sounds awful trying to help it
The color is red it is everywhere
I want to stop the government or tell them not to shoot
I feel afraid for them because they had more to come but its gone. 


By Suzy