Saturday, 5 November 2011

My Ski Jacket by Giona

My cozy, red, thick ski jacket is keeping me at thirty degrees when I’m supposed to be minus three degrees. I feel like a penguin every time I wear it. All the memories are tucked away in this little jacket like a treasure box with gold inside it. When it breaks, all the golden memories will leave like puffs of smoke...leaving me with nothing but sadness.
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous6 November 2011 at 22:45

    I like the part were you wrote if the jacket broke it will leave me but sadness.fiona

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  2. Rachel15 November 2011 at 19:44

    It sounds amazing so it will look amazing
    From Rachel

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  3. Anonymous19 November 2011 at 15:03

    Great describing words. From Madison

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