W.A.L.T choose and organise words.
Sad
Sad is like pain,
Sometimes it never goes away.
It is dark blue,
Like the deep blue sea.
You feel like you
want to cry.
You hear
the water flowing.
It makes you weep
and cry.
By Ciaran
Broken Hearted
Broken hearted is like being chipped with a miner's pick axe
By Jordan
Fear
Fear is like prickles in the grass
The pain you get when you touch them
The sound is screeching noises
It is dark purple and black that fills inside you
It makes you crouch down and hide
At the end you feel quite sick
By Georgia
Broken Hearted
Its like your heart is decapitated
It sounds awful trying to help it
The color is red it is everywhere
I want to stop the government or tell them not to shoot
I feel afraid for them because they had more to come but its gone.
By Suzy
AWESOME WORK Ciaran, Georgia and Suzy! I like the way how you described about your feeling and what a awesome line Jordan. That line blew me away.
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Max
Fantastic work Room 18. You did a great job of describing your feelings.
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